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Topic là drawbacks of city life nhé

Living in the city has some drawbacks as follow:

- Firstly, the city life has a high cost of living so some people who don't afford can't live in the city

- secondly, living in the city is too noisy for anyone who likes peaceful atmosphere. Noise pollution is more and more serious because of traffic jams, vehicles,ect

- Last but not least, the city life makes people feel bored and tired. Because the pace of life in the city is very fast, it is difficult for people to make friends or communicate with each other regularly

- In short, there are many advantages of living in the city but besides that the drawbacks of city life is still abound