Unit 3: My friends

My favorite day in the week is Sunday because is it the day that i can answer the question from other students who has study in Hoc24h (at the morning) and maybe (at the afternoon) i can relax or hear the music . How about you ? what is your favourit day ?

Đây là cả công sức của em đấy cô ạ ! Mong cô có thể  góp ý kiến về bài làm của em

Dear Le, 

Thank you (pronoun usage) for your letter. Of all the days of the week, the one I love best is Sunday. Because I don't go to school and stay at home. Sunday is the beginning of the weekend and I don’t have to get up early and can sleep more. Moreover, I watch some films or hang out with my friends to relax after a stressful week. If all members in => of (preposition) my family aren't busy, we will come to (preposition) my country to visit my grandparents and relatives. Furthermore (sai chính tả), I help my mum with housework. Finally, I review a number of => several/some/many (wordy phrase) lessons and prepare new lessons carefully.

How about your favorite day of the week? I hope you will tell me about it.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best wishes, 

Trang.

#Nhiều cái nó không đúng với sự thật của e lắm :)) Mong thầy/ cô nhận xét và sửa những lỗi sai cho e với ạ! <333

Dear HOC24,

My favorite day of the week is Sunday because it is quiet. Nobody works. In the morning, I normally go to the open-air (nó là 1 từ) market in my village to buy fresh food. Then, we have breakfast. We have lunch in a little house in the country. After lunch, we usually read a book or walk across the fields to pick flowers, or => ∅ (thừa từ) fruits, or (em nhớ trước các từ như and/or chúng ta sử dụng dấu phẩy nhé) to find vegetables. For me, the evening begins at 6.00 p.m. This is a time when I relax. Whenever possible, I watch my favourite programme. For me, Sunday is a day when I can relax after a busy week

Besh=>Best (sai chính tả) wish,

miku